NOTE: The video not is complete, because the memory of phone die.
This is the third
and final oral presentation of the course.
This time, we
talk about of bullying. We try this topic because think who is a one issue very
important. Because, although we are not aware, happens every day in our
society.
First of all, I
have to separate this comment into six parts: Presentation, body language and
eye contact, structure, content, language and by last the pronunciation and
intonation.
As we have all
seen, the video is not recorded in good light, so the body language and eye
contact I explain above, why only seen one part.
Then, I talk
about the presentation (10% of mark); in my opinion I think it was a good job
because we use different materials as prezzi, video, images, etc. And also see
something important is that each of the three of us, speak for 5 minutes
without out of questions.
After, we take
the body language and eye contact (10% of mark). In this case, I don’t comment
a lot, but I remember my mistake, looking at the paper when I not read, for
fear of getting lost or not remember what touched me say. We can see that
despite all, I tried not to take my eyes of fellow class.
We also have the
structure (10% of mark), really yes it was very well done because everything
was well ordered by importance.
Then, we are the
content (40% of mark) and language (20% of mark). These two paragraphs were the
worst, because failure grammar a bit.
And finally, then
the pronunciation and intonation (10% of mark); this part are very good,
because they are understand our explanation, buy some words were mispronounced.
In conclusion, I
think this presentation has been the best in the all of course, because we
prepared a lot this oral presentation and using short sentences to express
better.