lunes, 28 de septiembre de 2015

E-MAIL TO THE TEACHER

BEFORE:
When asked who we are, we always respond the same: our name, age, housing, etc. In my case is Lorena Galán Palacios, 16 years old and live in Castelló d’Empúries.
Also, we can explain our adventures, parties, concerns, etc. I was guided by the impulse many times and that is not always good.
As a child I was a little ballet dancer. Later, when I grew up I was and I still like to dance, I "hip-hop" for about a year. Now I usually go to the gym.
Normally in summer I usually go out every day, especially this year with my friends we have gone far to the beach by bike. And at night we went out to dinner or party or any activity we could do together. 
Right now I'm in high school social because it's over the summer and wanted to continue with my studies. Later I hope to get to go to college. I think making school is the best way to get a good level to enter the race you want.


AFTER:
Dear Teacher:

When we ask who we are, we always anser the same: our name, age, house, etc. In my case is Lorena Galán Palacios, 16 years old amd live in Castelló d'Empúries. 
We cant also explain our adventures, parties, concerns, etc. I was guided by the impulse many times and that is not always good.As a child I was a little ballet dancer. Later, when I grew up I was and I still like to dance, I danced "hip-hop" for about a year. Now I usually go to the gym.
Normally in summer I usually go out every day, especially this year with my friends we have gone to the beach by bike. And at night we went out to dinner or party or any activity we could do together.
Right now I'm in high school studying social studies. Later I hope to go to college. I think going to school is the best way to get a good level to enter the degree you want.

Best wishes, Lorena.